A Wolf and A Deer

A touch
I can not
A kiss
I never dare to dream
My caress
Would make you bleed
The longing that you felt
The blood-lust that i had
I am a wolf
Whose falling in love
With a deer

Tgr, October 2014

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25 thoughts on “A Wolf and A Deer

  1. Asyik idenya, Mas. Suaranya juga liris. Cuman perlu satu koreksi “whose” mestinya “who’s”… atau untuk memberi tekanan pada meter, sekalian gak pakai “who’s” langsung saja, “I’m a wolf/falling in love/with a deer.” πŸ™‚

  2. LDR aja kalo gitu… pasti aman πŸ˜€

    btw, a wild creature that falls in love with his prey reminds me of Twilight, ugh… I like the poet tho

      • awalnya bau darah Bella kan yang bisa memancing insting vampir si Edward, padahal Edward udah lama gak minum darah manusia hanya darah binatang.. he feels that blood-lust instinct only for her but also fall in love with her (atau mungkin justru itu penyebabnya?)

        I hate the movie but I remember the storyline, it’s a curse, duh…

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