Aku adalah cangkir biru
Tak sempat kau nikmati kopi manis di dalamnya
Aku adalah si biru
Membuat luka di telapak kakimu
Aku adalah si biru
Yang tak lagi menyaji kopi manis ke bibirmu
Bahkan dalam sisa hidupku
Sebelum terbuang di tong sampah
Aku akan membuat setiap langkahmu berdarah
I am a blue cup which fell
before you had a chance to drank the coffee in me.
I am the blue which shattered,
making wound on your feet every time you step on me.
I am the broken blue whose no longer serving you a coffee,
and in the very end of my life i will made your step bleeding.
your poetry speaks of the depth of your soul…lovely! you have a gentle heart…Blessings on you and your children!
Do you think so? Well, thank you and God bless you and your family too.
So beautiful! You are very gifted!
Thank you, Iz! 🙂
you should own a mini gallery with paints and poems? it would be great 😀
Oh, i would love to own a mini gallery like that. 😀
so, work towards that 😀
I will. 🙂
Wow, this drawing really got my attention – mybe it’s the crisp blue in it. Your art is amazing and I’m especially taken with the fact that you keep your blog (at least partially) bilingual. Great stuff! Thanks for your like on my “Drawing of the Day 5/22″ btw.
I am sorry about that, I am trying to make it bilingual in every post as soon as possible.
And you’re welcome.
Oh, don’t worry, I didn’t mean to put you under pressure. On the contrary, I think it’s great you translate as much as you do! Great work.
It’s alright. I want to do it anyway. It’s a part of sharing my culture with another.
Same here 🙂 I’m busy translating the rest of my stuff, too.
Haha.. i know exactly how it feel.
I like the look of the picture and the way the person and the fluid blend together.
Thank you. I do appreciate your comment, and glad that you like it.
Beautiful creativity.Best regards.jalal
I love the movement in this Alf! Effective illo and beautifully done!
Thank you very much, Elena!
Great depth within your words, Alf – even in English. I like it!
Thanks, Joshua. I do really appreciate it.
I love the drawing!!! That blue really pops!!! Awesome. I was wondering were you’ve been! What does the words say?
Thank you. I try to give you the meaning in English as close as possible.
I am a blue cup which fell and broken, before you had a chance to drank the coffee in me.
I am the blue which shattered, making wound on your feet every time you step on me.
I am the broken blue whose no longer serving you a coffee, and in the very end of my life i will made your step bleeding.
Thank you for the English version. I like it a lot.